"You also have manners, outlander". - Quote from book.
As an elder scrolls fan from Morrowind up to Oblivion, I must say I am impressed. The elder scrolls series definitely has a lot of rich material to base a story around, I will be looking forward to the second elder scrolls book.
A note to the author if you are reading this: I'd really like to see a Third book based in a time just before the Morrowind game, about a band of heroes who are trying to find Daguth Ur and bring him down, that would be quite amazing. You could bring in the Nerevar prophesy and the band of heroes do not believe in the prophesy but they cannot kill Daguth Ur because the prophesy is true and in the end they get themselves killed. Just a thought... sounds like an interesting plot to me.