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This review is from: "War Brides" (Kindle Edition)
This book irritated me on many fronts. The plotline of the story itself had the potential to become what I call 'a 3 dimensional book' but oh dear.
The characters were all presented in quick fire style and it became confusing to sort them out which wouldn't have been nearly as difficult if one weren't also trying to get past the APPALLING editing.There were missing words, words put in where they were not needed and didn't make any sense; full stops in the middle of sentences and the layout of the text at the back of the book was just off on a mission of its own.
I only paid 77p for this book but I begrudge every penny