good ideas but rather disappointing read,
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This review is from: The Jupiter Paradox (Kindle Edition)
Some promising ideas but overall I found that the story lacked depth. There is very little description of characters or events and the plot stumbles along rather clumsily, with apparently significant events such as a major battle that results in the capture of an enemy leader and the re-taking of a city given little more attention that my own brief paragraph here.
The dialogue between characters is also very stilted and wooden, which could work as a great illustrative characteristic of the logic driven, unemotional cyborg mentality but unfortunately it extends to the human characters too so I have to conclude that it wasn't an intentional feature.
This could be a great book (and I'd love to read a revised version) but at present it reads rather more like a first draft than the finished product.