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Customer Review

on April 26, 2012
First off, I enjoyed this. It was a strong plot from start to finish, and just the sort of thing I enjoy.

I do have a few niggles though.

The proofreading was better than many kindle books, but still left something to be desired. Mainly though, the entire work would benefit enormously from a good editor.

In many places the book reads simply like a list of actions rather than a narrative flow. (In my opinion) better/increased use of dialogue, and more "show, don't tell" would have done away with this.

So, overall, a good book that has the potential to be a great book, but which feels as though I read an early draft rather than the finished work.

I'll certainly keep an eye out for the author's other works though.
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3.9 out of 5 stars