This novel is inconsistent at best. Starting with a girl named Bryn complaining about how she hates rich kids and cuts herself off, and later on talking about her vintage car and how her parents had worked in law; and even being gifted a "$700,000" car like it is nothing. To top it off, the secondary main character William who she claims to love is just as wealthy as her. This does not seem very well thought through in general as part of the plot; the main character is flaky and inconsistent at best, the romance between them cliche and seemingly founded on nothing but the fact that they like the way the other one looks. Despite the explanation of how her stereotypical one true love has had visions of her for 200 years, frankly the 'relationship' between them is verging on ridiculous.
Whilst I would hope to see it get better and actually have the writer consider the plotline a bit more, I cannot bring myself to pay for a second novel to see if they actually have a relationship beyond attraction and self-pity which they share between them throughout the majority of the novel.
This being said, the writing in itself is not awful; the lack of plotline and development just makes this a pushing read at best and extremely unentertaining.
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