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4.0 out of 5 stars Very Good - but needs editing, 7 Nov. 2012
This review is from: Luminescence (YA Paranormal Romance) (Luminescence Trilogy Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
This book tore me in 2 - I completely loved it BUT it needs serious, serious editing work ASAP!!

The story hooked me in straight away. I quickly warmed to the central character, Brianna and I loved Gavin. It's an interesting story, although in a lot of respects this book seems to be setting the scene for the plot going forward,

The only downfall to this book is the editing - it's awful! Wrong words used, grammar mistakes and some fairly mangled sentences. I managed to ignore it but please, please do a re-edit so the form doesn't distract from this very enjoyable story.
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