I'm really not sure what the other reviewers are on about, it was an awful read I push myself to keep going till I couldn't take it anymore. The characters are totally unbelievable, so bad mid way I still hadn't formed a connection to them. It reads like you've never read a paranormal story before and fails to absorb you into the sorty line. Even in my teens I would have been disappointed with this read. Better luck next time, maybe you could concentrate on not feeling you have to explain the obvious in every statement the characters make it would be less painful, try to envision your readers as being competent and literate.