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Interesting but frustrating,
This review is from: The Whale Has Wings Vol 1 - Rebirth (Kindle Edition)
The basic premise of this book is very good and the research clearly impressive, but the terrible grammar and spelling errors drove me to distraction.
The worst flaw for me was the inconsistence use of tenses. One minute it is in the past tense, the next minute the present tense. Possessive apostrophes appear to be an unfathomable mystery for the author.
All of these problems would be addressed by an effective and relatively inexpensive proof reading service.
The end result would be far more readable, which is a shame because I think this is a good tale, well conceived and well researched.