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Customer Review

VINE VOICEon 24 August 2011
I picked this up out of interest after stumbling across a debate on the Amazon forums. It is, indeed, a short story concerning an ill-fated fishing trip and a creature from the deep. Positives include a nice brisk pace and easy, flowing narrative that raises a smile or two for the right reasons. Negatives include an ending that appears rushed and the overall piece is sorely in need of an edit.

So, then, three stars because two denotes under the Amazon rating system that I didn't like it. I did like it so it gets three. It is a serviceable tale with small teeth. With dedicated revision and editing its bite may become a lot sharper.
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4.3 out of 5 stars