To the author. Great imagination and a very good story line. The book felt rushed and missed a lot of great opportunities. This could be a great series if you take a little of Webb's way of getting into describing battles more. The building of characters is very rushed and you feel uncomfortable writing about social activities. My recommendation would be take time to describe the tech and how it works in a lot more detail, build the suspense up before battles and during and you have a great opportunity to take this story line forward to the next level.