The basic storyline makes an enjoyable read but I felt it lacked polish. Many, many spelling errors and use of incorrect words. Poor research in places (is it difficult to verify that Holborn is not on the Northern Line?). Parts of the story read like amateurish travelogue details, almost felt like they'd been included to pad the story out. Annoyances, but I will still read part 3 when it arrives
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