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Lacks haunting qualities
9 July 2018
I was attracted to this book because the cover and the blurb, made it sound quite interesting. Whilst the story is OK and fairly interesting, it's not great. At times the story seems quite chaotic and not well put together, at other times it flows well and you feel like you're getting somewhere. I struggled to relate to the characters, they seemed quite vapid and lacking in real depth.
Furthermore, I found the language to be quite simple in terms of it's writing style. For instance, it isn't necessary to always write “I'm going” He said. “Ok” She said etc – it just didn't flow to well and makes it more like a high school writing style. I found quite a lot of typing errors, which could have easily been overcome with a higher quality editing.