Top positive review
27 September 2017
The story was good - I rather enjoyed it. And for a ghost story it has an interesting spin, which I won't spoil. It's also extremely creepy in places. It's a little slow at the start to get going, but once it does there are certainly no problems with sluggish pacing.
My main issues are with the characterisation. I found all 4 characters a bit ... cardboard cutout-y. Too many stereotypes, and a couple of extreme character traits that I found a bit unrealistic. To be fair, it didn't detract too much from the story, but with a bit more work it could have been a lot better I think.
I'd give it 3.5/5, rounded up to 4 as Amazon doesn't allow half-stars, and 3 seems unfair.