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ok and will read more if this becomes a series.
on 29 May 2014
I really wanted the love this book, and it was good, but could have been amazing.
The story was so fresh, the missing mum, the affair.....and there was angst which I love. Also the supporting cast...mmmm those are some lush boys and I will look forward to reading more about them...
I also thought Avery was pitched right, she could be seen as a bit weak with Nate, but she's had a hard life and needs love, so is maybe more forgiving than usual heroines.
I got a bit annoyed with some of the back and forth, we will we wont etc... Which seemed to happen every few pages. If it was a roller coaster there would be lots of ups and downs but none massively high or low.....would have prefer longer climbs and bigger dips....