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Superb story but shame it wasn't proof read first
on 15 August 2017
I thought the story itself was excellent, so gripping but I was genuinely put off but the bad grammar, spelling mistakes and missed words. I had to re-read sentences because they weren't making sense. In the end I actually felt like getting a red pen and highlighting the mistakes there really were that many. Such a shame and unnecessary with computers today. Should be 5 stars the story was that good.