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Avoid If You're Not An NFL Fan
on 5 August 2015
I've deleted this 11% in as for me he may as well be writing in Swahili. All he talks about is American Football and almost every paragraph refers to it. I have glazed over and switched off. A shame as the story sounded promising but I can't be wading through that lot !!
I give you "in order to comply with Title Nine" and "He should've audibled into a hot route". It means nothing and I've absolutely zero interest in American Football and even less now after trying to wade through this.
However, I gave it an extra star because I hadn't happened across one mistake by the time I deleted it which is good news.