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Returned this two chapters in.
on 28 March 2014
I bought this based on the reviews, but should have downloaded a sample first, or should have read the US reviews, which talked of missing and wrong punctuation, which made for a tiresome and painful read.
This is not a full review, as I only read two chapters before returning it for a refund, but the writing was stilted, the dialogue didn't ring true, as there was no contracted speech, and there were many errors with the lack of punctuation, with the wrong use of apostrophes, etc.
I can't even say that with a good editor, this could be a decent read, as I didn't get that far into the tale, but it does need to be pulled and re-written to make it more believable and less painful to read.