Top critical review
on 15 January 2014
I must admit I was disappointed in this book, it didn't help that I didn't really like Gary, he's definitely a 'have his cake and eat it' kind of guy I also wasn't that struck on Alex either, particularly in Angel. The first book Bound Angel contained more sex than story, which I suppose would have been better if I'd have actually liked Gary, I've read a lot of erotic books and all of the ones which revolve around clubs like this one advocate safe sex, extensive tests are done and condoms are used I found it a bit disconcerting that at the interview stage unprotected sex was taking place, this you could argue is a minor point and yes it is but it was one of many things which bugged me.
The second book Bound Demon started better and for me showed more promise but it seemed to lose it's way and in the end was predictable and to be honest a bit boring.
So in summary this was not the book I was expecting, it needed editing, it seemed jumpy in places, wasn't particularly well written and when I'd finished reading I was left feeling let down.