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Book in search of a good proof reader!!
on 10 September 2013
The story is interesting and unusual, but for me it was spoiled by the constant errors of punctuation and some spelling ones. The punctuation ones were the worst, especially when speech quotes were used; they were constantly in the wrong place, and made following the story more difficult.
Properly edited, it would be a good read; conveys the Fifties era of the main part of the story very well, with that feeling of Boys Own adventures.