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Editorial problems dragged this down a bit ...
on 15 July 2012
IT's amusing, entertaining and generally fine, but the grammatical and spelling issues really did grate on me eventually.
Words left out, verb/noun agreement issues and homophone issues... but it was a good story, although I agree with a previous reviewer that him constantly referring to her as his 'little recluse' got a bit tedious.
Worth a read at this price, but if it goes up in price it needs editing.