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bit all over the place *contains spoilers*
on 19 March 2014
For a free book this was ok, however the story is told from everybody's point of view. This can be very annoying as half way down a page told from George's pov it will suddenly begin from the other person's pov, including his mistress, elizabeth's father etc. I sometimes had to read the lines a few times to understand where we had switched!
Elizabeth came off as a snob to me, she wouldn't even consider George as a husband, just a plaything that she can satisfy her curiosity with as he is just a cit. I don't understand why George would be interested in her to be honest.
The first 'sex' scene goes on forever and was boring.
I also found the continued description of Elizabeth's mouth forming a perfect 'O' annoying.
It's not a bad book but it doesn't really inspire me to want to read other books by the same author.