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Not bad, not good
on 20 July 2014
Don't know that I would pay for more books from this author. There are a few typos, but more annoyingly there is some plain, straightforward bad English. Men don't wear suites, they wear suits, an injury victim is a casualty not a causality, and so on.
The story started off okay, but about halfway through it attempts to change track, and just descends into a bit of a bloodfest.
I don't mind gory, but it's just not very well written gore -- and that just gets boring.
Nice try, but you need a story editor and a proofreader, Mr Collins.