Top positive review
on 13 August 2016
The storytelling is excellent, but there were times where I felt that Mr Jones was trying too hard. To hard to be novelish. To use the correct word or phrase.
This is the 2nd book in the series, but it didn't reference the first one at all. This one takes place in the US, as did the 1st one. Same characters, bar one, but no link in the story at all. This disappointed me.
Finally, I read this on my Kindle app. Someone did not do a good job proof reading it. Wrong words, missing words; sentences making no sense. Obviously not the author's fault but it spoiled the story in several sections.
So, a good story, spoiled by sub-par checking.