Top critical review
Room For Improvement !
on 5 February 2015
At the start I though I was going to love this book, with it's interesting mystery involving characters I knew from childhood. Unfortunately I was left disappointed.
I found the writing to be very inconsistent, along with the plot. It was all over the place and didn't really make much sense. The amount of fairytale characters didn't really help either, they just made all the more confusing.
I feel this was very rushed and with more time and effort could have been shaped into a much better novel. The characters could have actually helped, and deepened the plot without being confused and frustrated.
I did like the idea of the fairytale aspect, but in this case there was too much and it didn't sit right with me. Unfortunately I can only give this two stars because there was a-lot of room for improvement.