Top positive review
Great, but has it's flaws
on 25 March 2013
Brilliantly written, and for the most part absolutely gripping and excellently paced. There were, however, two things that bothered me:-
The big revelation could have done with coming a bit sooner at a point where it can still catch the reader by surprise. As it stands I felt it gently led you to what became increasingly obvious.
And the ending...I won't go into detail but it came across as rushed, but in all fairness it's probably highlighted as a result of how well the rest of the story is paced.