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Good tale that needed to be just a little bit longer to make it really good.
on 5 October 2012
I thought that I would be getting an antho, but it was a short tale with one story by TA Webb. Apparently, it's his first tale, and it was a decent one. It was a freebie, so I can't complain that I didn't get any of the others advertised, but I will be checking those out.
This short tale combines cops undercover, danger, double-crossing, heartache and betrayal, a family reunion and a bout of light make-up sex. The tale needed to be that little bit longer, to include more discussions as to the reasons for the break-up, and the make-up sex could have done with being an entire epilogue all by itself.
However, for a first try, it's a very good read.