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This is a joke ... right? Even the dedication on the front page is grammatically incorrect.
on 21 October 2014
Utterly laughable and rediculous. It reads like a 10 year-old wrote it. An 18 year-old super-spy who has inherited his strikingly handsome features from Hollywood actor father who has won 8 Oscars !!!!
In the first chapter alone seven consecutive sentences start with the word "He ..." In the same chapter the writer describes as "The north arctic wind blew relentlessly against his coat." Then a few lines later, "his happy belowing laugh cutting through the still night air." It's just completely unreadable.
Same chapter - "Ben knew without any modesty that he attracted every female within his one mile radius." "To the casual eye it would seem as though the heavens had thrown all their gifts on one individual, brains, beauty and psychic shrewdness."
Psychic shrewdness!!! The 4 and 5 star reviews must be friends and family of the author because this is puerile nonesense. If English isn't your first language, please don't try and write a book in English. Words cannot describe how bad this is.