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Decent effort but ultimately slightly disappointing.
on 9 February 2015
Decent enough effort for a novice writer. I personally found some of the dialogue between the characters repetitive and occasionally superfluous. Nice enough interaction but some of the localities could have been more descriptive and in-depth. After all , what's the point of dragging the reader to farflung locations if the colour of the places doesn't shine through.Although Hereford was aptly described, so am assuming the author resides there or in the Marches.Also needed some better editing as quite a few omitted words and typos apparent. A mediocre adventure story that needed some added depth.Decent enough read for a freebie though.Hence the 3 star rating.