Top critical review
on 20 November 2013
This is my second downloaded book by this author and have to say as much as I enjoyed it, I really struggled with the appalling spelling, typo's and editing, hence only three stars. At certain points I was completely confused, as whole sections of text, which should have been broken up into sentences and paragraphs were bulked together in one long rambling section. I found myself having to go back and re-read to mentally punctuate and edit to make sense of it all. This is such a shame because its a very enjoyable story with great characters.
All that apart I like this author's style, short punchy sentences and great banter between characters.
Harry (Harriet) the main character is a fun, feisty likable stunt girl. Alex the male lead also features in the author's last book and there's also a brief mention of the main female lead from that book too. I am expecting characters from both books to appear in her next book, as this seems to be her way.
Very good story but please sort out the editing for the next one!