Top critical review
on 2 December 2012
The premise behind the story sounded great. To start with a few gramatical errors niggled at me. But, unfortunately, things went from bad to worse! It is one thing to find one or two errors that should have been picked up during proof-reading, it's another when they are in practically every sentance. It got to the point where nearly every single sentence on a page was lacking a full stop. One last gripe, please learn the difference betwern "your" and "you're" before subjecting the public to more of this bad writing. It's a shame as I got the impression that the author really could see her characters clearly.