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Very badly written and edited.
on 22 June 2012
I have to agree with the reviewer Nicola Taunt. This book is appallingly written and edited. This is a shame as it probably has the potential for a reasonable story.
Some of the sentences don't actually make sense. The grammar and spelling would shame my 8 year old niece. The formatting is also very bad - though this may only relate to the Kindle edition.
I have only reached chapter 5, and the story hasn't really begun. Unfortunately I don't know if I can persevere with this book as I am becoming invreasingly irritated by the poor writing style and bad grammar. I don't understand why this book was published in this state.
Luckily I only paid 77p!
Update...........I did persevere with the book and did enjoy the story, if farfetched