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Can't pay, want food, drink, shelter" (!)
27 March 2016
The story jogs along nice (wrong verb, I know). You may have reservations as to whether their challenge is a worthwhile one or just a 'rite of passage'. This may affect your 'enjoyment factor' when reading. It's interesting to see how people react to the line "Can't pay you but can I have food and shelter?".
Fortunately they were a little more subtle than that when they made their pitch!