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FAB STORY - RUINED BY SPELLING/GRAMMAR
on 27 March 2013
I have read all of Pamela Ann's books - I love her characters and storylines but I have to be totally honest and say that she DESPERATELY needs a different editor. I initially assumed that the books hadn't been professionally edited until I saw an accreditation. This made me laugh rather loudly as the spelling, grammar, syntax in all her books is nothing short of atrocious. There is a really bad habit of sentences just stopping in mid air, words are missed out and, in fact, some words are just plain wrong in terms of their actual meaning or within the context of the sentence.
These errors do a huge disserve to the author's obvious imagination and potential talent as a writer.
Please, please, Ms Ann - a bit of decent proof reading and editing could make a HUGE difference to your future success.