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Rushed and sloppy
on 1 December 2015
The ending was far too rushed, as if the author was trying to cram in too much into the ending. The addition of 'Pop' also seemed forced, and his character served little more than to fill time in a pretty pathetic attempt to add depth to the novel, as did the hinted introduction of 'Cash'. What also proved to be frustrating was the characters' sudden forgiveness of Gloria - her impending death shouldn't automatically forgive her near-psychotic meddling and interference. However, perhaps there was a lot more to it, and was simply cut out because of the author's lazy attempt at concluding the novel in short, sloppy sections.
Though the second instalment to the series provided some closure, it was a very poor novel overall and appears to be deviating completely from the original plot.