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on 11 February 2005
David R. George III hasn't been the most prolific Star Trek writer, but he has been one of the most effective recently. With two wonderful Deep Space Nine books to his credit (Mission Gamma: Twilight and co-authorship with Armin Shimmerman of The 34th Rule), he has rapidly become somebody who I *must* check out when I see his name on a Trek book. In Serpents Among the Ruins, part of the Lost Era series of Trek books, George does yet another great job, this time rehabilitating the character of Captain John Harriman, captain of the Enterprise B (seen in the movie Star Trek: Generations). In the movie, he's kind of an inexperienced dweeb, lessened in order to make Captain Kirk seem that much greater. George obviously wanted to do something about that, and he's created a book with wonderful characters and a tense atmosphere.
This story pretty much has everything a Trek fan could want: Klingons & Romulans, interesting Federation characters (including Demora Sulu, our favourite Sulu's daughter), tension, a little bit of humour, and a huge action sequence. It also provides us with an early look at Elias Vaughn, who later (in the Deep Space Nine relaunch series) becomes first officer of the station. Having become very familiar with Vaughn from the Deep Space Nine series, it was interesting to see how he started out. How much has he changed? This is his first field mission for Starfleet Intelligence, so we do get a lot of nervousness and a little bit of angst when something happens that he's never done before. While I did find the angst a little annoying at times (while realistic, I thought the book dwelled on it just a bit much), Vaughn is an interesting character who we want to learn a lot more about.
The most impressive thing about the book, however, is Harriman. As I said, the only exposure to Harriman that most of us have received is in Generations, and it's not a good one. There is also Peter David's The Captain's Daughter, but I read that so long ago that I have no idea how he was characterized in it. It's now eighteen years later, and Harriman has become a very skilled commander, well-loved by his crew and respected by Starfleet admirals (except his father, which really becomes an issue in the book). He's also extremely interesting to read about. At times, his introspection goes on a bit too long, but most of the time it's very enjoyable to get inside his thought processes.
The rest of the characterization is done extremely well too. Sulu is Harriman's first officer (she was just a new helmsman in the movie, but she became first officer about ten years ago) and we get a lot of insight on her, as well as some on her relationship with her father (in hindsight, though, as Sulu does not appear in the book). When she has to take over the ship, she shows that she's ready for a command as well. The Romulans are distinct and very intriguing, and the Klingon political intrigue is extremely well-done, though sometimes the Klingon politics doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the book. This may lead into the next Lost Era book, which deals with the Klingons and Cardassians a few years in the future, so it's not a major point. Even the rest of the bridge crew for Enterprise have enough character hooks to make them interesting, even if they aren't truly three-dimensional. All the way around, characterization is one of George's strong points.
The other strength is the way the book is written. The chapters are a countdown to the incident itself, adding to the tension and making the reader want to keep going. The prose is extremely good for a Trek novel, bringing the reader deeper into the story with every page (and you have to keep turning that page). George handles both the quiet moments and the inevitable action sequences with equal aplomb. The last hundred pages are pulse-pounding, as Harriman's plan comes to fruition but obstacle after obstacle seems to keep getting in the way. I had to stop for breath when I finally reached the end of this section, it had me that riveted. Finally, I have to give him credit for painting a bullseye on the forehead of a character and then *not* killing him/her off! In fact, George does the exact opposite. Bravo!
The only problem with this book is that there is some repetition of little plot details that isn't really necessary. I know this happened a few times, but the most prominent is the condition that befalls Ensign Fenn. George has Sulu tell us about it in her thoughts at least twice, both times in great detail. There are other times where George does the same thing with information, compelling me to say to myself "we already know this, can we move on?" While this could be seen to emphasize how important something is, Fenn's condition doesn't really affect the plot much (which also indicates that the subplot could have been cut). It became a bit annoying at times, but I was quickly engulfed in the story once again and forgot about it.
Serpents Among the Ruins makes use of a lot of Trek history, which could be a good thing considering there are none of our "favourite" characters in it. Thankfully, George doesn't hit us over the head with continuity explanations. Instead, he gives us a solid tale that you will want to race through to see what happens next, but at the same time you'll want to read it slowly so you can savour it. Personally, I raced. I can't help it. It was that good.
David Roy
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on 8 May 2014
Anyone who watched Generations will remember the odd casting of Ferris Bueller's highly-strung best friend as the next Captain of the Enterprise after Kirk. This flightly, nervous young man rapidly got out of his depth and had to be rescued by The Shat, before presumably being remembered as the man who lost James T. Kirk in space.

David R. George is one of a few authors determined to rehabilitate John Harriman, and he does so well in Serpent Among The Ruins. Harriman masterminds a fairly convoluted Intelligence operation designed to forestall a devastating war with the Star Empire, giving some body to the 'noodle incident' of the Tomed Incident.

It's readable, enjoyable, if a little flaky and shallow at times - George's prose is serviceable and standard. His grand galactic scheme to fool the Romulan and Klingon Empires is ambitious but suffers slightly from a lack of believability in-universe - it's kind of a stretch to believe that all parties would mutely accept the situation Harriman engineers.

Nevertheless, it's a good novel and comes recommended.
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on 4 April 2014
The deeper one traverses the depths of this, the first LOST ERA novel, the stronger one can detect an underlying current of sophistication. Don’t get me wrong – there have been many classic works set in the Star Trek Universe that stand up against anything ever written in the science fiction genre. But this one in particular just stands out. The characterisation is outstanding. Initially a little daunting, the book is very, very wordy but after a few pages, one begins to see the wood for the trees and suddenly the reader can see the sense of all the talk. We get to know Captain John Harriman and his elite crew. We get to know his family, his love life, their history and his personal future and plans. His personal life alone is well depicted and even that aspect of the story is worth the price of admission alone. Naturally, we are already familiar with the ship Harriman and his crew have been blessed to serve on. And of course the footfalls of the current crew echo against the ghosts of Kirk, Spock and McCoy et al who traversed the same ship and its passage ways many times in the past, much to the Federation's glory.

Tension and political intrigue abound throughout this interstellar tale, which hints at a possible allegiance between the Klingons and (gasp!) the Romulans, along with the ever present threats of double cross and duplicity. They both seem to think the Federation are being duplicitous themselves by developing a"meta weapon" - the likes of which the galaxy has never seen. Of course us Fans of the Federation know (from faith alone) the exact opposite, and are fascinated as we learn and witness what the good guys are actually developing.

That is the plan, anyway. Naturally, I won't reveal what happens but a star trek novel this complex and sophisticated would not be worth the paper it is printed on if the plot did not twist in as many unexpected ways as possible. And this one does.

Humour has never had a major role to play in a star trek novel. This one is no different. But against the threat of interstellar war, and rumours of mega weapons powerful enough to destroy planets in the blink of an eye, it would be totally out of place. But Star Trek bas never been about making you laugh. It is about technology, exploration, moments of gasp-inducing discoveries and senses of wonder.

It is also about humanity and learning what it means to be human.

This book delivers on all fronts.

Full marks for this classic.

BFN Greggorio!
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on 4 April 2014
The deeper one traverses the depths of this, the first LOST ERA novel, the stronger one can detect an underlying current of sophistication. Don’t get me wrong – there have been many classic works set in the Star Trek Universe that stand up against anything ever written in the science fiction genre. But this one in particular just stands out. The characterisation is outstanding. Initially a little daunting, the book is very, very wordy but after a few pages, one begins to see the wood for the trees and suddenly the reader can see the sense of all the talk. We get to know Captain John Harriman and his elite crew. We get to know his family, his love life, their history and his personal future and plans. His personal life alone is well depicted and even that aspect of the story is worth the price of admission alone. Naturally, we are already familiar with the ship Harriman and his crew have been blessed to serve on. And of course the footfalls of the current crew echo against the ghosts of Kirk, Spock and McCoy et al who traversed the same ship and its passage ways many times in the past, much to the Federation's glory.

Tension and political intrigue abound throughout this interstellar tale, which hints at a possible allegiance between the Klingons and (gasp!) the Romulans, along with the ever present threats of double cross and duplicity. They both seem to think the Federation are being duplicitous themselves by developing a"meta weapon" - the likes of which the galaxy has never seen. Of course us Fans of the Federation know (from faith alone) the exact opposite, and are fascinated as we learn and witness what the good guys are actually developing.

That is the plan, anyway. Naturally, I won't reveal what happens but a star trek novel this complex and sophisticated would not be worth the paper it is printed on if the plot did not twist in as many unexpected ways as possible. And this one does.

Humour has never had a major role to play in a star trek novel. This one is no different. But against the threat of interstellar war, and rumours of mega weapons powerful enough to destroy planets in the blink of an eye, it would be totally out of place. But Star Trek bas never been about making you laugh. It is about technology, exploration, moments of gasp-inducing discoveries and senses of wonder.

It is also about humanity and learning what it means to be human.

This book delivers on all fronts.

Full marks for this classic.

BFN Greggorio!
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on 7 October 2003
Captain John Harriman weaves a wonderful world of intrigue and deceipt in this gripping novel by David R Geaorge 111. In my opinion one of the very best Trek writers we have at the moment.
We also learn a great deal more about Capt. John's relationship with his father, Admiral Harriman. and how it is resolved.
DRG111 gives his characters life. I could really picture the scenes when reading the dialogue, and found this novel to be one of the most exciting I have read for a while.
This book is the second in the Lost Era series. The Sundered by Martin and Mangels being the first. These books can be read individually but are such terrific stories I would suggest reading them in the order they are printed. One a month for six months.
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on 10 December 2013
Slow going even knowing the characters - not the best read, story line was dragged out far to much, hopefully better on second read
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on 13 February 2004
This is one of the worst books I have encountered recently. It completely failed to grip me and to hold my attention. It is boring, and it just goes on and on and on.
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