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Not a bad start - I'm enjoying reading this book
3 May 2018
Not a bad start - I'm enjoying reading this book, which I bought because I've followed Leda since she first became an internet celebrity back in the days of Dailybooth & because I want her to succeed & do well. It does read like a "Debut novel" - there are the odd mistakes here & there which a good editor should have picked up on, but overall a great effort at worldbuilding. I'd like to see where this goes & hope that Leda puts in the work to hone her craft by writing, writing, writing more & more, and by getting good constructive criticism & working with it.