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should have been so much better
on 7 February 2014
some of the other reviews have suggested this could have been better and I would agree, the chance was here to expand on early days of the jedi and how they came about and what they were all about and how they developed etc. what we got here was a chase across planets by characters you weren't really invested into and didn't associate with particularly.
It should have been much better, in comparison to Darth Plagious this was a poor attempt, author should have read that first to see how it should be done.