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I have really enjoyed the Commonwealth Series and was looking forward to delving ...
on 15 January 2016
I have really enjoyed the Commonwealth Series and was looking forward to delving back into that world again with this series. But this two story line approach really drags with the Harry Potter, Junior Gangbusters Waterwalker sub plot. Although it underpins the theme of the book, i.e. the Void, it just feels like a kids story hidden within a proper adult Sci Fi novel that is the other half of the book. After yet another tedious episode of gang busting, magicians tricks, romances with beautiful 'princesses' down in the enchanted Kingdom that is the Void world you are all too briefly back in the more interesting Commonwealth universe. Please more sci-fi and less of the tedious sub Harry Potter dungeons and dragons kids storyline.