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Great story but not converted properly for kindle, major part of story not represented!
on 13 November 2016
Not suitable for kindle!!! The story in the book is great, I bought it because I enjoyed the first diary "hell" so much. This book has had an awful conversion to kindle however which is inexcusable. i) Archer describes things such a prison menu choices, the pictures of these are too small to be seen properly and double tapping or zooming in does increase the size but at the cost of the resolution, making them too fuzzy to be seen properly. What's worse however, is that a substantial part of the plot is taken up by an artist inmate whose work apparently appears in the book, there are several references to "see colour plate section" no doubt this exists in the printed book version, but it is entirely absent here! Furthermore, the editing is terrible, all books have a few typos etc creep in, but this takes the biscuit! There are several places where there are 4 or 5 mistakes on a single page. Not all books are suitable for a "copy and paste to kindle" job, some require a bit of extra work; where Amazon can't be bothered to do this extra work there should be a warning to customers explaining that not all of the content is available.