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Decent stories, horrendous writing style.
on 25 June 2016
Reasonable story and writing style but very repetitive and the author has insisted on using full proper nouns throughout. Really needs significantly better pronoun use.
There are only so many time you can read:
'Milly Molly Mandy said...'
'Best friend Susan said.....'
before you give up.