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A few flaws.
on 22 June 2013
Someone ought to tell Tish Rabe that pluto is not a planet anymore. The "trick" to remembering the planets in correct order was just confusing. Could have improved it with easier names rather than Meetzahs for mars, and a better layout of the trick would have made it more straighforward. I don't think it was fluid enough in that respect. Don't get me started on the "rights" which were far too many when they did appear eg "we're spinning right with it right now every day" and "right this minute a million of our earths could all fit right in it". Then you have the "cause" and the "em", i don't think it would have hurt the rhyme at all to say because and them instead.
A side from that, a great little book. My child loves it and it is full of wonderful information that can be learnt quickly with lots of fun. I actually had no idea the sun was a star, so thanks for improving my mind :)