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unfinished unrealistic irritating
on 14 June 2016
A good story but with some unfinished business. Things just didn’t happen. I waited for some solutions to some affairs to develop and nothing happened! So unfinished!!
Also quite unrealistic at some points. I found it difficult to imagine the face of a teenager with all this unreasonable description of her personality. I could only see the face of a forty something. Hard as I tried I couldn’t picture the face of a teenager, as she was described as a person with a lot of knowledge about almost, if not, everything. A very determined mind and a lot of life experience, a self-sufficient, hard worker, capable of solving any situations at all. The confidence of a person who had a lot of life experience in many aspects. I actually thought it was a joke. At the beginning I could see a young mischievous teenager. Then, suddenly, in a matter of weeks, appeared this person with this most impressive outstanding behaviour, and skills capable to carry out any tasks, independently of how great or small they were. Her talents and competences are those of a person with simply a lot of experience in the workplace and in life itself. She was portrayed as this most remarkable woman. Well, she was only a teenager with a mind of this much older person. I am not saying that teenagers cannot have a remarkable personality and character. But the life experience that the character has, is just not possible for a teenager to have, not even if the teenager is a genius. One needs life and work experience to show what one is capable of in some aspects of life. Nobody can have so much experience within a few weeks in any business, let along in every aspect of life too!!! Suddenly her chronological age was forgotten and she became a fifty plus woman (in her mind only). Sorry but the description of the personality and the responsibilities of the main character were ridiculous and quite irritating.