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on 20 August 2014
Bought this book on offer and for the price was worth it.
The story revolves around an ex marine sniper/CIA agent and his partner who get asked to help the FBI out when an agent is kidnapped. This soon turns into a manhunt for the culprits who then commit domestic terrorism.
The story is ok and the author keeps the pages turning. Never made me feel I couldn't put it down tho!
The main character is a bit wooden. Some of the conversations are stilted and one dimensional. You feel as if he is going to start singing Star-Spangled Banner at times! Some of the passages are a mutual admiration society between characters after they have only just met...not how real people are or talk to each other.
Would be better if the characters were less wooden, conversations and thoughts more realistic and less like a cheap B movie.
Overall not bad and hope the other books improve, tho if the second the same as the first I will struggle to continue the series.