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Spend an erotic night of BDSM, Domination/submission, and exhibition with Jim and Kay this weekend..


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Initial post: 16 Feb 2013, 10:32:59 GMT
Wildfire8470 says:
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Posted on 16 Feb 2013, 14:16:59 GMT
monica says:
'Now I have you.' He murmured the threat as he glared meanacingly into her post. 'You must be punished; did your Master not tell you that you were not to use his forums to advertise? Did HE NOT???!!!' She looked out of her faerie-born green eyes pleadingly yet in her clavicle she felt a mystic excitement. 'I shall by the name of The Dragon Igor--a character in my forthcoming fantasy trilogy West To The Quest--never do so again, Sir.''Too late!' he said menacingly, 'you have tried the patience and tested the good nature of those who post without seeking financial recompense. You,' said he with menace in his bones, 'must be punished.'

In reply to an earlier post on 16 Feb 2013, 14:33:02 GMT
Anita says:
Mind adding a link, monica?

Posted on 16 Feb 2013, 17:52:47 GMT
gille liath says:
Ah, good old spam...where would we be without it?

In reply to an earlier post on 16 Feb 2013, 17:53:35 GMT
gille liath says:
'In her clavicle'? :) Does that mean something other than I've been brought up to believe?

In reply to an earlier post on 16 Feb 2013, 18:17:47 GMT
Marion Stein says:
Did it just get hot in here, or was that a flash?

Posted on 16 Feb 2013, 18:34:40 GMT
Chris says:
Erotic fiction seems like it'd be a doddle to write. I reckon Monica could knock one up in half an hour.

In reply to an earlier post on 16 Feb 2013, 18:50:29 GMT
gille liath says:
I'm not sure she has the necessary equipment...as a writer, that is.

Posted on 16 Feb 2013, 19:07:52 GMT
Last edited by the author on 16 Feb 2013, 19:08:30 GMT
gille liath says:
Here's a question, folks: how come women are now all clamouring to be bossed about in bed? Whatever happened to Women On Top? Did Feminism die in vain - or is it just sheer bloody idleness?

Posted on 16 Feb 2013, 19:13:54 GMT
Ethereal says:
Change of daytime roles perhaps, now more women are bosses.

Like men in powerful jobs always seem to get caught with their trousers round their ankles.

In reply to an earlier post on 16 Feb 2013, 19:15:54 GMT
gille liath says:
Or is it that women have found out being in charge isn't all it's cracked up to be?

PhD there for somebody...

In reply to an earlier post on 16 Feb 2013, 19:34:00 GMT
I Readalot says:
Interesting thought. In reality though a large number of men have always wanted to be dominated, saw a programme involving the 'dungeons' a while back and the majority of clients are male, females clients are quite a rarity apparently.

In reply to an earlier post on 16 Feb 2013, 20:40:52 GMT
monica says:
Yes. So do 'mystic' and 'bones'.

I actually looked into guidelines for self-publishing here after writing that--writing badly is so much fun that I thought it would be great gas to put together a manual for those would write--Kindling Your Inner Writer, perhaps--written competently in chirpy Yank tones, presenting examples of bad writing as examples of good. Anyone who took it seriously would be both inspired to write and would write even more badly than they might have done without my assistance . . .

In reply to an earlier post on 16 Feb 2013, 21:04:22 GMT
gille liath says:
Sounds like a winner. It'd work on both levels, like the Ferrero Rocher adverts.

In reply to an earlier post on 17 Feb 2013, 15:23:05 GMT
A customer says:
Where would YOU be without it...nothing to get flappy about

In reply to an earlier post on 17 Feb 2013, 15:28:33 GMT
A customer says:
I boss my partner in bed. Flip her over put her in positions, tell her what to do: she loves it. But she'd kick me in the bollockkks if I tried bossing her about out of bed. Does feminism mean changing what you enjoy, loosing your sexuality and becoming some kind of butch dominatrix?

In reply to an earlier post on 17 Feb 2013, 15:29:40 GMT
Last edited by the author on 17 Feb 2013, 15:30:42 GMT
gille liath says:
Er...isn't that what I said?

So, what about this thread title attracted you to the Fiction forum...?

In reply to an earlier post on 17 Feb 2013, 15:32:51 GMT
A customer says:
The plug of the awesome book by the OP

In reply to an earlier post on 17 Feb 2013, 15:34:18 GMT
gille liath says:
It does make a welcome change from those boring threads where you need to have read books and that.

In reply to an earlier post on 17 Feb 2013, 15:35:34 GMT
A customer says:
I read it. Had an erection from start to finish

In reply to an earlier post on 17 Feb 2013, 15:55:16 GMT
A customer says:
Ahh it's starting to make sense...frustrated writers are frequenting these forums..hoping to get noticed. Sorry Monica, your passage makes Karens awesome writing seem E L Jamesian. Try some erotic literature based on your own sexual experiences if its not too freaky

In reply to an earlier post on 17 Feb 2013, 16:58:21 GMT
Anita says:
Just for you as for my ex: you are wrong about Monica. I know her for eons and can vouch for her: she never writes and does her best to remain unnoticed. She always fails, obviously. Attracted even you to this thread, wow

In reply to an earlier post on 17 Feb 2013, 17:01:05 GMT
A customer says:
That's cos she sounds hawt

In reply to an earlier post on 18 Feb 2013, 17:26:24 GMT
Marion Stein says:
I actually looked into the whole Fifty Shades thing, including trying to answer that question. I'll admit I was thinking if I could manage something like that (published under pseudonym) I too could be rich, rich, rich. The writing is bad, and by bad I don't just mean cardboard characters and insipid dialogue, I mean full of annoying quirks like character catch-phrases and characters constantly identifying each other by name in the dialogue.
After checking out some of the fora devoted to it, reading some reviews etc, I concluded that the BDSM stuff isn't incidental to the success, but it's not the reason for it. Gray's sexual quirks just become a "problem" which the protagonist must "fix" with "love" because the basis of a lot of romance (Jane Eyre) involves a strong woman somehow "curing" an injured man and making him all better.
While it spawned many quickie books involving rooms of pain, they haven't caught on beyond the pre-existing market for those kinds of books.

In reply to an earlier post on 18 Feb 2013, 19:47:34 GMT
Last edited by the author on 18 Feb 2013, 19:50:54 GMT
gille liath says:
That's an interesting take on it, though I don't think it changes the fact that the story (apparently) reverts to an old-fashioned male/female power relationship - or at least the illusion of one.

Brave of you to read Fifty Shades in the name of research! Don't think I'll be going that far...
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