Paola told me that she wants her erotica to be more arousing for the reader, more pornographic. It certainly did the job it was assigned. A few sentences into the story the action begins and it doesn't slow down. There's no resolution, just a climax. A long, long climax that extends beyond the story once it's finished. The ending does something unique, it gives the reader the chance to finish the story for themselves and it stuck with me long after I finished reading. Women's pleasure is highlighted in this story, something that is not prevalent in non-feminist porn. There's no gagging on penises, just sex. Pure, enjoyable sex. Both men and women will find this story has a desirable effect on their body. Paola's erotica delivers what the author intended it to: a story to turn you on. Quality writing makes the story enjoyable to read and a brilliant imagination made 'Moon' one of the hottest erotica short stories that I've read --onherback.com
You got me right in the chest, almost stopped my breath. Your story was intelligent and surprising, two of the biggest turn ons. Erotic, experienced and well-written. --Rob W.