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Bit disappointing, preferred the earlier version
on 17 April 2013
Nobody writes erotica like Selena Kitt and this story is no exception, but I didn't enjoy this as much as I hoped I would.
I am a big fan of Selena Kitt's erotic novels and 'Under Mr Nolan's Bed' revised version in particular. I've also read the original version of 'Under Mr Nolan's Bed'. The difference between these two versions is that in the original version, Mr Nolan is Erica's father but in the revised version he is her step father. This becomes important once they all begin to get busy later in the book. I know it's all a fantasy, but father/daughter incest was way too much for me. Ew. Without spoiling the story, the ending was also changed between the original and the revised version to a happy ever after, which suited me just fine.
In this latest version, the action happens in the 1950s, a more innocent time. Not for this family. The sex scenes in this were sublime, hot and a real turn on. The relationship between Rob and Leah was developed further in this story and I really enjoyed reading about a good old romance as well as reading the rude bits. However, some of the really hot threesome scenes from my favorite 'revised' version were cut altogether which was my first disappointment. The second disappointment was the ending. Again, without giving away the story, I can't now see how Rob and Leah can be together now. Ew (again).
Having said that, I eagerly anticipate reading the second and third part of this new version of the story in the hope that some of these details change along the way. And also, frankly, because I am absolutely confident that the sex scenes will be superb, so stuff the story eh?
I got this story as a free download in return for an honest review.