- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 3777 KB
- Print Length: 85 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Blushing Books Publications (31 Mar. 2014)
- Sold by: Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00JELPVM8
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Average Customer Review: 3 customer reviews
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #271,399 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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Tameable (Warrior Masters Book 1) Kindle Edition
|Length: 85 pages||Word Wise: Enabled||Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled|
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The dialog was juvenile and stilted. Writing dialog in without first thinking about how it would actually sound coming out of someone’s mouth just results in characters and actions so unrealistic that a reader cringes or really wants to throw the reading device at the wall.
The writing style was choppy and lacked a smooth transition from one event/action to the next.
Not very imaginative with a female protagonist that has too many TSTL moments. Use some creativity to get your protagonist in the scene that you are setting up – do not dumb your character down so that you can set up a contrived scene. It’s not just getting your character from point A to point B – it’s HOW the character gets from one point to the other in a REALISTIC manner.
The book came off as a rough outline of an idea without the knowledge or experience to bring the characters or actions to life for the reader.
This was definitely and quickly “return to Amazon” moment. If the author wants to keep trying – she need to invest in some creative writing classes, and maybe read some really good books in this field such as the PETS series by Darla Phelps.
Overall this is a very interesting story with a great concept. We have twin brothers, Roman and Julian, of the Trian race that are guarding and eventually claiming as a mate, Hybrid Trian, Amanda, a divorcee, who is a writer and determined to claim her independence. Apparently there is another species who wants to claim, rape, enslave and destroy Amanda and her daughter, the Saipiean warriors. It is imperative for the Trians to protect their women, and in this gated cul-de-sac it is all Trian men guarding and protecting their women. They know that Amanda is a hybrid from a Trian father and human mother. They invade her house, spank her, then take her home with them. At first Roman and Julian are willing to fight to the death to claim her but she convinces them that she can mate and be with both of them.
For the story line I give it a 5 but this book needs re-edited, several times the words were not in correct order and near the end one line reads: He was riding me like a mounted thoroughbred house he was breaking in to a saddle. Because of the lack of editing, that gets a 3, so overall I will give it only 4 stars.
I liked this book but found it to be too long winded in some places and I would have liked it more if it had been longer.
In this sci-fi fantasy, these alpha men practice domestic discipline. Twins Roman and Julian fight for the right to be Amanda's mate. Amanda's unknown past is uncovered when she moves to a new community where every man seems to be a model. Their caveman antics shouldn't impress nor arouse, yet it does.
Ms. Kingsley pens a cute story which tries to incorporate a little too much in a short period of time. It is possible to bring ménage, aliens and domestic discipline all into one cohesive story. This one falls a bit short because it feels rushed. The different plot devices and thrown together with little character or world building. Much of the story is telling rather than showing. To also throw in a bit of ageplay just makes the story more disjointed. It feels as if each piece doesn't get a fair share in the story which leaves the reader a bit unsatisfied. Still, it's a fun little read to give people a little taste of Ms. Kingsley. This sci-fi fantasy is recommended to ménage lover who favour domestic discipline.
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