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on 22 December 2014
Frankly, there are some portions of this book that make no sense whatsoever. It is such a shame that an original idea such as this is spoiled by poor grammar and woeful proof reading as well as nonsensical passages of writing.
There is no excuse for sloppy writing especially if one is charging money for the pleasure of reading.
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on 8 June 2014
I really enjoyed the story it was novel with some fresh ideas. The author didn't try and preserve the main characters which meant you couldn't be sure of their survival in precarious situations .However the spelling was terrible often tying the flow of whole passages.
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on 19 June 2016
The plot was excellent, moving quickly and entertaining HOWEVER the spelling and grammar was appalling there is no way this series has been proof read. If you can make sense of the grammar, substitute words as needed then it is worth sticking with it. Keep an eye on the characters as they are sometimes confused necessitating rereading.
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on 22 February 2014
Love the series cannot get enough of it keep writing please
amazon keeps sending me on books I think I would like they have come up thrumps with this author
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on 29 December 2014
great book loved it
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on 19 March 2014
Loved the book & got really involved in the relationships between characters. Now I want to know what happens next!! More please
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on 3 February 2014
Please, Please, Please use a spell checker before publishing.

Despite the spelling errors definitely recommend this book.

This is a good book to read
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on 9 January 2016
A excellent read a very good series of books
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on 8 January 2014
I love this book cannot wait for the next to be released. One of the better Mage short story book series
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