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mistook the genre but writng still doesn't cut it
on 8 February 2013
Essentially this is a romantic novel, which I didn't realise when I chose it. So I can't offer much on the plot. It's not my taste.
However the writing is excreable.
From the blurb:
"Police Chief Mike O'Connell can't keep his mind off of (sic) beautiful, high-spirited Rachel Parker"
From the book:
"An invisible frequency, like a Bluetooth link, hovered in the air between them"
"Anticipation kindled at the thought of an eternal solution to his current problem, of acting instead of only watching"
I just can't read this stuff.