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Good story, poor consistency
on 3 June 2013
I have now read 4 Kindle eBooks by J Jackson Bentley.
In each case the story was enjoyable.
In each case some of the main characters randomly changed their names. In this story, for example "Trevor George Baker" becomes "George Arthur Baker" in the later chapters - not helped that this same character is using 2 other pseudonyms in the story!
I had assumed that these stories were sefl-published and had not been reviewed by an editor, but I see that the author gives credit to his editor, so I guess they both missed these inconsistencies.